Leanne's partying ways catch the attention of all the guys in the club, but she's shimmied into her best dress to catch the eye of just one man. Peter, her older, more experienced neighbour, doesn't seem to get the hint. Will tonight be the night where he finally takes the hint – and her? This 4,300 word story contains hard bareback sex, voyeurism and more. Grab this hot rLeanne's partying ways catch the attention of all the guys in the club, but she's shimmied into her best dress to catch the eye of just one man. Peter, her older, more experienced neighbour, doesn't seem to get the hint. Will tonight be the night where he finally takes the hint – and her? This 4,300 word story contains hard bareback sex, voyeurism and more. Grab this hot read and leave yourself Breathless!...
|Title||:||Breathless: Party Girl|
|Format Type||:||Kindle Edition|
|Number of Pages||:||591 Pages|
|Status||:||Available For Download|
|Last checked||:||21 Minutes ago!|
Breathless: Party Girl Reviews
So I am not giving this book a one because of the story but because of the SERIOUS editing issues involved. I tried to like the story but when you have the same page showing up twice as you try to read the book it gets pretty annoying.. The pages were duplicated throughout the entire book and after you finished reading one you had to find the end of the next one (they were even in two different fonts) in order to get to the next page in the story. So for what I did read of the story I am going to say that it was interesting and I think I would change my review if the editing issues were fixed and I could actually finish the entire story without having to read each page twice. I am not sure who broke it whether it be Amazon or the author but there are some serious mistakes that need to be fixed before ANYONE should attempt to read this story.I am so annoyed by this because what I could read, I wanted to read more of and I feel so bad for giving this author 1 stars but it cannot be avoided because something this severe should not make it to someone's Kindle where that someone could potentially have to pay for the mistakes. I normally do not get mad over minor editing mistakes. Hell there are probably three or four in this review alone but I do get angry if the editing causes me the inability to finish what seems like a pretty damn good story line. If the book gets fixed I will consider changing my review.
This book, to me, was a waste of my 30 minutes. It was a free on amazon so I thought I’d give it a shot. Short Erotic Romances can be very good but with this one I ran into a few problems. There were some editing issues; extra words, misspelled words, sentences that confused you and things like that. Then there was the story; I get it it was 17 pages long and so shouldn't have expected a whole lot but I just found the story in general to be lacking body. The story starts out in a club with the main character/party girl wasted. I’m all for a good time but the author made her sound like a complete floozy. There was an alley way hook up, a creepy masturbating neighbor, and a very erotic scene where you can’t help but wonder, does she even know if she wants to get laid? The story itself kind of ended abruptly and of course with more sex. All in all I was disappointed and a little creeped out. Don’t get me wrong, I love to read smut but this just didn't appeal to me in anyway.Original Post At: http://babygotstacks.com/2014/03/05/b...