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Dear Author,A moment of inattention and I found myself in the hands of my enemy. I was captured, restrained, interrogated for information I don’t even have. No one is coming for me; I knew that without his taunts. But if he thinks I’ll surrender, he has another thing coming.Photo Description: A young man with neatly trimmed brown hair, thick eyebrows, and piercing hazel eyDear Author,A moment of inattention and I found myself in the hands of my enemy. I was captured, restrained, interrogated for information I don’t even have. No one is coming for me; I knew that without his taunts. But if he thinks I’ll surrender, he has another thing coming.Photo Description: A young man with neatly trimmed brown hair, thick eyebrows, and piercing hazel eyes stares at the camera, looking determined. His torso is bare except for leather restraints surrounding his neck and wrists. A rope is wrapped around his wrists several times and through a ring on the leather cuffs, and holds his hands suspended next to his head.This story was written as a part of the M/M Romance Group's "Love Has No Boundaries" event. Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice. Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story....

Title : Loyalty Deserved
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ISBN : 18386027
Format Type : ebook
Number of Pages : 62 Pages
Status : Available For Download
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Loyalty Deserved Reviews

  • Runell
    2019-02-03 16:46

    Brilliant idea, but the execution was terrible. I know that it's a short story, but everything felt too rushed and the characters were all amazingly flat and stupid to me. It started out good and then just got progressively worse until it just hit rock bottom with me which is sad because I really wanted to like it, because as I said, the idea was brilliant.

  • Sunny
    2019-01-23 12:29

    I liked the the world building and I think this story line has a lot of potential for future stories. I also liked the characters, but they feel a bit one dimensional and I'd like to see them fleshed out a bit more. I see this as a nice intro to an interesting world and I hope the author is planning more stories.

  • Stacey Jo
    2019-02-12 15:36

    I really enjoyed this one! It has good action with space ships, bad guys chasing after good guys, good guys on opposite sides realizing they both are maybe on the same side after all. Great chemistry. Really good world building. The only thing that could be better would be if the story was longer so all of the cool concepts could be played out better.

  • Melanie~~
    2019-01-24 14:45

    Good story. I liked the progression of the characters. Interesting premise for the bad guy.[NOTE: I rate most writing event stories (free reads) 4 or 5 stars because of my appreciation of the author's participation.]

  • K
    2019-01-21 13:22

    LHNB Story released 27.8.133.5 stars rounded upThis is a well built futuristic sci-fi story. Connor is a shuttle pilot for the Democration and has been captured by rebels, led by Nic Matisse. He holds firm under questioning believing he will be tortured for what ttle he knows, but Nic's attraction to him means that he ends up reveling more about the Democration and his own links to the Democrator who runs it. Feeling unable to send Connor away to a planet where all their captured enemies are sent to live in safety, Nic returns him to the Democration - where things go from bad to worse. This is a nicely written story with a slow developing relationship between the two MC's

  • Katharina
    2019-01-26 12:45

    A nice, little sci-fi story, rather predictable (actually I've read something very similar plot-wise just a few weeks ago) and not very substantial, but still entertaining. The characters and the world building could have been a bit more complex - and I'm not sure I really understand all of the characters' actions and behaviour. The story was rather fast-paced, though, and there was a lot going on for such a short story which made it a quick, diverting read.

  • Kukko
    2019-02-11 12:23

    Main Characters: Connor Spalding & Nic MaltisseKey Themes: War, Kidnapping/Abduction, Location: Outer SpaceMM romance between a misguided naïve loyalist and a genius rebel leader.This was a fun read. It’s got good world building, although the characters were a little two-dimensional and significant events just happen...conveniently.Best of all…it’s FREE!

  • Kelly H. (Maybedog)
    2019-01-29 13:18

    This is a solid 3.5 star read for me. Once again I hate that GR won't let me do that. The beginning was a two but the middle and end were closer to a 4. So I'll round up. Review to follow.Happy ending? (view spoiler)[Yes, strong HFN. (hide spoiler)]

  • Katy Beth Mckee
    2019-02-14 18:42

    This is a well written fantasy story. It explores the conflict of being loyal to what you believe and what happens when your beliefs are brought into questions. Some really heavy and dark stuff.

  • BTina
    2019-02-02 12:35

    The story could have been great. My rating went down from 4 stars in the beginning to 1.5 stars to the end.

  • SheReadsALot
    2019-01-31 12:28

    Yep, I'm reading this.

  • Misty
    2019-02-09 13:29

    ** 3.5 Stars ** Many thanks to Kathryn Sparrow for this free story!

  • Zane Kage
    2019-02-13 13:31

    2.5 stars

  • Lila Hunter
    2019-02-09 12:34

    Good world built. A sequel would be great.

  • Tamara (緑)
    2019-02-17 17:43

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  • Jeanne 'Divinae'
    2019-01-26 15:39

    Good story. Love the set up of the 'world'. Not everything you are told is always the truth. I like how Connor had to come to terms of the truth and believe in Nic. Would love to see more of them.

  • Victoria
    2019-02-17 13:28

    Nice interpretation of the photo and the story letter. Thank you Kathryn Sparrow for donating your story, your time and your talent.

  • Maddox
    2019-02-02 15:27

    3.5 stars.

  • Miriki
    2019-02-03 17:33

    3.5The plot has potential but the writing's just so-so. The characterization was bad, both of the MCs were stupid beyond words. The romance part was developed too fast, it felt superficial.